In class writing

I feel comfortable about the silent movie that we made. I feel like the movement and the music timing should be more precise. Honestly I made feel mistake during the part that I trying to kill John. Lots of those movement my move was fake to the audience. And I feel like we did a lot of action with out any prepare. I also like the silent movie that the other group, although I felt that was hard to understand at the beginning but they did explain everything in the final draft.